The store is working for me, though the newest version of it is pretty slow and the Firefox plugin isn't working properly... I really hope that they finish fighting soon, but we know how stubborn the both of them can be. At least, the end of this chapter gives a bit of hope, though I have my doubts that Ray will give in easily this time. Here's a raw translation of the last pages, starting when Flo enters Ray's room:
Noir, are you in there? I come in!!
Now... Sara told me that-- You...
!?
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Florian
Azu...ra!?
Nice to see you ... again Florian Seems that Maria is (deep) in your debt now
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--- Since when... are you here...?
Shortly after you. --- Sara contacted me...
As all is said ---Excuse me
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Azura... what about... Maria?
--- She tried to kill me ... but she's still the woman who is pregnant with my child
Don't worry I don't intend to harm her. At the moment...
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---So? What's the matter
You... What did you ask Sarah for?
--- What did you hear about it?
That you're staying here Sarah said that it's because of me...?
Thank you! I was able to purchase the issue at last. Having your translation made it much better, but I'm still impatient - I want to see Ray and Florian settled again, and I'd like to see Florian put some of his fear of Azura to rest.
I'm not sure yet. I still haven't fully decided how I feel about some of the events in this story. It seems like things are too unsettled for Florian to be able to put his fear to rest.
I really hope that they finish fighting soon, but we know how stubborn the both of them can be. At least, the end of this chapter gives a bit of hope, though I have my doubts that Ray will give in easily this time. Here's a raw translation of the last pages, starting when Flo enters Ray's room:
Noir, are you in there?
I come in!!
Now...
Sara told me that--
You...
!?
-------
Florian
Azu...ra!?
Nice to see you ... again
Florian
Seems that Maria is (deep) in your debt now
-------
---
Since when...
are you here...?
Shortly after you.
--- Sara contacted me...
As all is said
---Excuse me
--------
Azura...
what about... Maria?
---
She tried to kill me
... but she's still the woman who is pregnant with my child
Don't worry
I don't intend to harm her.
At the moment...
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---So?
What's the matter
You...
What did you ask Sarah for?
---
What did you hear about it?
That you're staying here
Sarah said that it's because of me...?
If that's the case
I---